@orange21654

“Hi, I think for rendering you could benefit simply from adding more details. Your portrait already has a great foundation and it shows that you already have a strong understanding of values and form, ”

“Hi, in my paint-over to make the flash photo i mainly established a clear light source and made a few anatomical changes. I can tell in the original picture you already have a good understanding o”

“I repainted the form and the proportions of your oc. Your attention to detail and linework is great, it shows that you have great knowledge on smaller value changes. However the structure of your pain”

“Your artstyle is already super charming, while I don’t know exactly what your goal art style is, in my paint-over I kept the elements that I found are done well like your anatomy, line quality, and fa”

“The colors you picked were super pretty and you have a good understanding of drawing details, though the flatness that you suspect in this piece is because you didn’t establish a light source, and al”

“Because you have a more semi realistic style you had a good foundation for the structure actually, I think the issue with your “off” feeling comes from a lack of form clarity. In this specific piece, ”

“I’m not sure exactly what style you’re rooting for so I went more semi-realistic for the example paint-over, but I think if you struggle with hair then look on studying form structure. In the paint-ov”