Character Perspective

Hi, I would like feedback on if the character in perspective looks believable and if there is things i can improve upon. For context i placed the HL a little above the head of the character (orange line). Bc of earlier super helpful feedback from here im trying to practise drawing characters in perspective every day to get a better feel for it and hopefully improve that way! so i would love any input to apply for tomorrow and onward! :) <3

Perspective and proportions

Hi! I wanted to challenge myself with this drawing by drawing two characters interacting in perspective, but i kinda pushed it and realised my spatial awareness needs more work 😂 Something feels really off in their proportions and the perspective, but I can’t pinpoint it… So any advice on that would be highly appreciated! Apologies for the scratching and differing opacity, i kept redrawing things and it made it a bit messy.

For this character drawing i wanted to have the character light a cigarette while walking as he makes a phonecall. The pose was supposed to make him come off as disorganized, nonchalant and carefree. I feel like the pose looks stiff and unrealistic even though i referenced myself. Especially from far away it reads oddly. I would really like some feedback on how i can improve the read of such a pose like this, so i can learn for the future.