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#5
Rango
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“Great drawing, love his gesture and expression! My respect for completion the Inktober challenge!”
“Hello, great character idea and execution, here are some of my suggestions: give hime more weight in pose by implying he is using a hooks to balance and move like pair crutches. Made his one han”
“Hi, here is my roundbrush attempt for this study, it is a fun challange, for color there is mostely red, oranges, yellow and violets used, with diffrent level of gray. To confidentely paint a portr”
“Hi, this is a nice drawing, don't be so harsh on yourself. In my opinionm proportions are fine, shat is missing is a contaposto for a pose, if you lower hips, shoulders should follow. Aslo pay ”
“The drawing is looking very nice, clean delicate linework, looking forward to see the colored version!”
“Hi, nice drawing I like your style. Here is my idea for the pose and notes to the image: Right now SKeletor has few proportional anatomical issues that should be resolves: Size of hhands, he lo”
“Hello, I like this drawing a lot, at this stage I don't have much to critique, execution is clear, story is redable, I see only two minor dlements I would correct: The hopscotch decal on the floor sho”
“Hello, nice drawing, I like your style. Here is my overpaint and notes. I would push his pose more , broader shoulders, longers more proportional arms, leg forms rendered to indicate its true po”
“Hi, welcome, you did great, don't worry abour color blidness, painting is mostely about values. Take a look at LiXin Yin artworks, he is also colorblind. Now to the Knight study, I did the ove”
“Hi, great drawing! Here is my overpaint and notes: I would make her stand in a heroic pose, hair blown with the wind, rather than lying down (if I read the sketch correctly) Her pendant in her p”
“Hi, it is sucessful value sketch, I think that you capoture the gesture and graphic read nicely. Painting is not about getting the values "right" because there is no right way of painting, since act ”
“Hi, first I will say that your hatching is nice, and I like the way you stylize your shapes, a bit Bridgmanesque. My feedback is about underlying anatomical problem this hand is having. Fingers hav”
“Hi, here is my overpaint drawing of your reference. Now as I could go into details why I made those decisions, I will give you genral advice which I think will be more beneficial at this stage. ”
“Not really a feedback, your construction process is on point, and I see tahis page as a sucesfull exercise. If you are aiming for more stylisation and breaking from realism, instead of working with ch”
“Hi, here is my feedback and notes to it: I think his pose is a bit unrealistic, also placment and proportions of th body parts could be adjusted. Hand gripping the staff should respect the stick v”
“Hi, cool demon design, I like his pose and gesture. Here is my overpaint. In my opinion main issue with the background is that it is not following tha same perspective as the character. I have p”
“Naah, I think the anatomy is fine for the sketch, on top energy and gesture is great with this one!”
“Hi, nice painting! Here is my overpaint. I want to bring your attention towards shadow shapes, and shapes in general. In m over paint I've painted patches of light and shadow with sharp bolder”
“That is perfectly striking depiction, so that I can feel it... Stay strong and take care of yourself.”
“Hi, here is my sketch, how you could tackle the issues you are facing: Indicate her eyes as closed Make her posture straight and empowering, with the arm move forward, suggesting as if she just fi”
“Hi, this is a great illustration, you did a good job rendering. In terms of achieving more three-dimensionality here is a overpaint and some explanations of thought process behinf it. Key to mov”
“Hi, I woudn't add more black, what you need in my opinion is light and shadow separation by color. I did it digitally, to simulate how it could look as if you add some color wash. Using black wi”
“Hi, I like your line art, quality, here is a drawing of what could be a solution to your request. Right now nose is not in the same line as the mouth, so I have moved it. Also made the eye small”
“Good attempt, don't get discouraged, you are making progress :) There are indeed some things to solve, here is a drawing how I would approach them. Generaly if you feel that you are missing asom”