I like the texture you have going on with the piece. However I noticed that your shadows are quite light and the lighting is quite confusing which makes the piece feel unfinished, so I decided to make the main lighting around the bottom right side shining upwards and darken the shadows base off that. I also noticed that the shoulders are very squished together which makes the pose feel more stiff. However, I choose to lean into it and make it feel like the character is being squeezed into a smaller place against a wall of some sort.

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Anonymous · 2026-10-18T05:36:16.117Z

anatomy, colors, lighting, or just overall composition to make the piece more interesting

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I like the texture you have going on with the piece. However I noticed that your shadows are quite light and the lighting is quite confusing which makes the piece feel unfinished, so I decided to make the main lighting around the bottom right side shining upwards and darken the shadows base off that. I also noticed that the shoulders are very squished together which makes the pose feel more stiff. However, I choose to lean into it and make it feel like the character is being squeezed into a smaller place against a wall of some sort.

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