Again, I apologize for how lacking this paintover is and for removing her glasses! I didn't remove them because they were a bad design choice, they were not, only to show the face better.But I hope you see what I mean about edges. I also adjusted her face, defined her nose, added a darker shadow under the lips to stop them from blending into the rest of the face. I didn't add a cast shadow from her hat though, and the neck and chest area I did pretty much in two values. Lastly, please pay attention to the darker shape at the bottom of her jaw. This is also to define the face from blending into the neck. My last tip: turn the artwork into grayscale if you're not sure what's not working, it can point out the lack of contrast pretty early on, and check out paintovers by Angel Ganev in his YouTube shorts, he explains this stuff very well. | Artwod Feedback