Edit: typos/forgot to add paintover 😅 Hi! Congrats on drawing something you are content with - we need some wins, too :D Aside from technical aspect, illustration is all about storytelling. I changed monsters arm/hand to imply that it tried to attack the knight. Made its eyes completely blank to emphasize that it passed out. Changed ear and cloth position to imply motion. Added tail for more visual interest. Hope it helps. Don't stop! | Artwod Feedback