Mayene From Honor of Kings

Hi! I think your main problem is the position. Her left arm is stretched out uncomfortably behind her, while her right shoulder is pushed uncomfortably forward. The joint of the shoulder doesn’t move away from the body so to make it look natural you need to move the arm behind the chest as it would naturally be in front of or at least next to the arm. Remember the body is essentially a rectangle so twisting I the simple shape will help you get the position right. A: Her left arm is pushed too far back, the arm doesn’t naturally go back that direction, try bringing the shoulder and the bicep forward towards the camera. B: There’s wind blowing her hair in the image but nothing else is moved by it- if you incorporate wind, make sure you have a direction in mind and make it clear for the viewer where the wind is coming from / going C: Her right shoulder needs to be pushed backwards in line with her torso thanks to the perspective where the chest is in front of the arm. D: the arm, instead of going over the chest, will push into the side of the chest as it starts out behind the chest and ends in front of it at the pelvis. E: The right knee is short compared to the left one so I shortened it to the same size. If you deconstruct your form into basic 3D shapes, it will help you stay consistent with your proportions :) Unfortunately my response image is getting falsely auto-flagged so I had to move her right arm which is why it may look awkward, apologies! I really hope this was helpful, sorry if it was a lot! Good luck with your art journey!