This looks amazing ! I added some reflects in her eyes, because eyes are very very wet (well, if they're healthy) so they get lots of reflections from the light ! I also added some bounce light on the bottom of her nose, and made her right eyelid wrap around the eyeball/socket more + smoother transition between the eyesocket and the nose + cheek (i hope it makes sense) ; added stronger shadows below her head, around the neck ; last changed it added more light to her teeth slightly, my thinking was that teeth are shiny and catch lots of light due to their "material" :)
ohhh thank youuu for the feedback! This made me realize I still struggle to apply lights and proper shadows , hard light, soft light, even bounce lights hahaha and yeaa, what you did to the eyelid makes more sense T.T I shall keep your feedback in mind for my next works, thank youuu again! she looks more alive now :3