Intro to Portraits, Section 4 (For real this time)

The last submission was section 3!! I finished the intro to portraits roadmap today, and here's the final workout. I always had trouble with construction because I skipped steps in a hurry to get to the details and then the whole drawing fell apart, and I think I finally learned how to approach it calmly and correctly. The biggest problem I can see is the hair, I think I rely too much on lots of lines and it ends up looking unnatural. I'm not very good at likeness, but that wasn't the point of the exercise. Any other feedback about the construction, form and anatomical detail is welcome!

The king slayer

I’m not satisfied with this drawing, I think it’s too simple and flat, what can I do for improve it ?

War worn princess

What can I do to improve the rendering? It looks too flat. If you also have something to say about the anatomy I’ll take it too

Fire lady

What do you think of this painting of me? I really struggle with light and colour theory so feed backs are always welcome

Redraw of an old piece - yandere bunny Belphie

This is a piece from 2023 that I want to redraw for the monthly challenge. While the colors are fairly good, the anatomy and composition could be improved 🫣 Plan is: 1. Find better composition 2. Use current anatomy knowledge to build underlying structure 3. Render the illustration

Cello

Hey. I'm having problems with the cello and perspective of it.

untitled, in progress

i'm struggling to identify the anatomy issues because i dont have a reference. lighting wise, i think maybe i need more constrast and struggling with hair+ wrinkles. Kind of hesitant to work on ears and the piercings on his face

video game final boss

i can't get the composition right in this scene. the lighting is completely off, but i don't really understand why and why the colors don't really compliment each other that well. i want it to be like when u reach the final boss chamber in a video game and there's this reveal of this horrifying monster in the dim light... maybe its the composition that's not fixable at all?? ty in advance for your advice!<3

Headshot portrait

Hiya im trying this new rendering style and id like some feedback on how to push it more especially on the face and i need help with my anatomy and proportions to make it look more semi realistic thank youu