Ey, qué onda! :D This looks awesome! I took a look through your work, and everything you make is incredible! To be honest, I'd love to be able to create dark fantasy illustrations like yours someday, haha. Anyway... I don't have much to say regarding the rendering itself. I don't see any major issues—the forms read really well, even the ones that remain in shadow. However, I think the main thing that's missing is a stronger light hierarchy. I would push the spatial separation between the mask and the girl much further. Right now, they both have a very similar level of contrast, so they end up feeling as if they're on almost the same plane. The mask could receive much stronger highlights, crisper edges, and deeper shadows, while the girl could remain slightly softer to create a greater sense of depth. Finally, I think the scene would benefit if both characters shared the same atmosphere a bit more. Some warm bounce light coming from the mask's mouth onto the girl's hair, cheek, and shoulder would go a long way toward integrating them. Likewise, letting some of the cool color from the smoke contaminate a few of the mask's shadows would help everything feel like it exists in the same environment. I didn't paint in the smoke, but hopefully you get the idea, haha. Hope this helps! :) | Artwod Feedback