Hi, I would first focus on the light/shadow shapes! The easiest way to check this is to be aware of the 3D forms of the face and body (I drew some of them in blue). Secondly, when you have a good idea of the forms, remember to use some soft edges as well. For example on the forehead, which is one big curved plane, so the shadow in this case, with this ight setup is going to be more gradual. I hope it helps! c: | Artwod Feedback