Make a prominent jaw
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Hi, i'm drawing a fanart here. So I feels like something went off but Idk what makes me think like this? Please lmk if something wrong here.
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For feedback #2 I try to follow the extreme tilt indicated by the position of the ear to the brow ridge, and also following how much is visible of the side plane of the head. That would shift the entire view more towards profile, the centerline of the face would move to the left, and you'd have to wrap the features of the face much more around, also with the nose potentially overlapping most of the eye. With this kind of extreme tilt though the angle of the jaw and cheek would shift a lot as well, and even more of the hairline would sit basically hidden behind the curvature of the cranium. So your intuition was correct, but you chose a notoriously tricky angle to draw either way, and got a bit lost in the carefull construction of the basic shape and planes of the head I fear. The construction of the front parts of the face and the indication of the planar shifts with values though is already very promising though, and in the construction phase you would have mostly avoided the off-feeling by mostly moving the ear up and adjusting the shape of the side plane a little bit. You'll get there in no time! Ta-ta~
Just as an extra, it seems there is a bit of a bug with the hub not showing my first feedback from a different angle. I hope that'll get fixed eventually!
Yeah. Is okay. Although I couldn't get the full picture of the 1st feedback but I still able to screenshot half of it. No worries haha. Thx :D
Hey, you tackled a challenging pose here. It's great to see that you did think about how the extreme angle will foreshorten some of the facial proportions. But I think what is off is the general underlying construction of the head. Your portrait sort of is a hybrid between two poses, borrowing characteristics from one another that don't work together though. Therefore I'll give two feedbacks depending on what you think is closer to the original idea. The first construction would be a less extreme angle where a lot of the frontal face plane is visible. If we assume this, then you're positioning of the sideplane of the head is off. It should sit higher and so would the ear have to be placed much higher. A good indicator to find the actual degree of tilt in a portrait is to connect a line from the brow ridge to the ear. In a level view, they will be on pretty much the same height. The lower the ear sits in comparison, the stronger the tilt upwards. So the relatively modest tilt of the frontal plane doesn't match up with where the side sits and also how much is shown of it. Smaller adjustments then would likely include moving the hairline accordingly, and perhaps adjusting the shape of the eyes, as the viewing angle from below would need for a bit of overlap of the lower lid that will cover up more of the eyeball. Feedback #2 will be the more extreme angle.