I think the flatness comes from the nose. I think you are trying to show the light from the phone is washing out her features, but the nose is a 3D shape and would cast a shadow. This isn't perfect but I think it illustrates the point.
I feel like this drawing looks really flat and something just seems off to me ,but I can’t point out what it is
I think the flatness comes from the nose. I think you are trying to show the light from the phone is washing out her features, but the nose is a 3D shape and would cast a shadow. This isn't perfect but I think it illustrates the point.