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Heres my WIP, invited a friend from Discord to hit the other side - but feel free to add yours :) I hogged all the space (im sorry haha) but, feel free to like cover that tenticle and push over whatever. -Feedback ive been staring at it for days now, if you have comments please send. I'm gonna polish it up and try do someone elses side.

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@artwodguyEl día de ayer

such a cool card!

@kidmoeEl día de ayer

Hey, Thanks so much Antonio!

@kidmoeHace {count} días

Ok. Try this one. Is there a way to delete previous? or mods can you fix?

@kidmoeHace {count} días

Thanks for the help Fosco! Made some changes to the size on the left and added some outline. Here She is, my sub for the challenge.

@kidmoeHace {count} días

oops the cats tail got cut didnt notice.

@foscoHace {count} días

Hey dude! This looks so dope so far! :D I didn't make many changes since I felt like it didn't really need much. :) The only thing that felt a little off to me was the bottle being held by that tentacle/ribbon. It was a bit too large and too close to the character, which created some visual tension or even a slightly claustrophobic feeling (at least from my point of view). So, I reduced the size of the goblins, the tentacle, and the bottle to give that area a little more breathing room. I also think you could emphasize the line art around the character's silhouette a bit more to help them stand out. :) Hope this helps!