I think the perspective is really interesting, the elbows are quite close together so spreading them out will make them look more natural. I’ve attached a paintover for what I would change, alongside tips for the lighting. Assuming the light is the only source in the room, the hands would be a lot darker as they are facing away from the window, and making the shadows darker and the lighting brighter will help to add realism to the painting. In this way, it’s a little difficult to add lighting to the stamp which is clearly the focal point, so it may be better to tilt the hands towards the window in order to keep the stamp lit up. I would also angle the table leg to keep it in line with the perspective. Hopefully this was helpful!
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First Painting - MoxRBP
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New artist here. Looking for feedback on basically anything wrong that yall see. I struggled alot with the anatomy and rendering of the fingers and the hand in general., hence the comically large thumb. I wanted the light from the window to kind of cascade onto the desk, but I don't think I was really able to achieve that well.