Love the idea and your execution is pretty good too. Two things I would point out. The first is to ask “did you draw the other ear?” Your tire is a little off center. If you draw through the form that will help you place details that are hidden by overlapping forms. Lastly, try to be more mindful of the perspective and the effect of convergence. Although your vanishing points are far off the page, there is still a certain amount of convergence that you need to take into account. The tray above the wheel was tilted the wrong way so I adjusted that. Great work though.

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MARK EVANS · 2026-08-29T21:03:13.680Z

I am working on form construction and using contour lines. Any suggestions would be appreciated. I also am trying out some facial proportions. I know that the eyes are points different directions but the ink was already dry when I notices.

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Love the idea and your execution is pretty good too. Two things I would point out. The first is to ask “did you draw the other ear?” Your tire is a little off center. If you draw through the form that will help you place details that are hidden by overlapping forms. Lastly, try to be more mindful of the perspective and the effect of convergence. Although your vanishing points are far off the page, there is still a certain amount of convergence that you need to take into account. The tray above the wheel was tilted the wrong way so I adjusted that. Great work though.

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