Redraw of my first gray-scale painting

Very proud of this turned out

Redraw of my first gray-scale painting

2022 Vs 2026

help with heads

I was trying out my new display, and I drew this head. I have been trying to get a more realistic manga style, but this drawing for me is kind of bad. So, if anyone can see a way to keep it less realistic but still better, please share. Tips for coloring are good as well, but I am more focused on the actual drawing.

FIGURE SKETCH

Beginner artist here.I don't know what mistakes I am making and what I should correct. Please guide me

hi

proportions, making the blanket and pillows more accurate

old version of oc

this is the old version which was drawn 2 years ago

Cartoon fan art

I’m really bad at drawing faces in cartoon style. I can get the body down (albeit 2D only, and I did have to trace the hands), but it is just missing something. I’d just like some help with creating a face and making it pop. I do have background and other aspects to the piece, I am just looking for help with the portrait. 4/4

Cartoon fan art

I’m really bad at drawing faces in cartoon style. I can get the body down (albeit 2D only, and I did have to trace the hands, but not the tattoos!), but it is just missing something. I’d just like some help with creating a face and making it pop. I do have background and other aspects to the piece, I am just looking for help with the portrait. 3/4

Cartoon fanart

I’m really bad at drawing faces in cartoon style. I can get the body down (albeit 2D only, and I did have to trace the hands), but it is just missing something. I’d just like some help with creating a face and making it pop. I do have background and other aspects to the piece, I am just looking for help with the portrait. 1/4