This is a fantastic sketch, just seems anatomically incorrect because his sword arm is upside down. The elbow pointing up suggests that his arm is heading downwards to unsheath the sword from a scabbard at his waist and not suggestive of holding the sword upright which he is doing here. Simply rotate that arm 90 degrees by pointing his elbow downwards and the dynamism should come alive.
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Gin in action
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Hello, I have been working on my proportions and posing for a while and this is one of the pieces I finished recently. Would love to get feedback on the what I can improve to make the piece more dynamic and well-proportioned. Thank you in advance!
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Heres my couple of cents, you could focus on undrstanding the pose first, drawing whats underneath before adding details/clothing, understanding the way the body is connected is key. You can look in do clothing and how it behaves/hangs around the body too. And a tip to either have your character look at his sword or right at the viewer can add some intensity to the image
Thank you for taking the time :)