Hi there! Great job at making it this far in the road! I think your form indication is actually rather good, but I would try and make your elipses/circles less of an almond shape. So try practising that a little bit more (it is very tricky) and then when they have volume, like the wheels, try to make the transition a little bit more smooth so you also don't end up with any sharp corners there. Hope it helps! c: | Artwod Feedback