Hi, this spread is looking really fun!! I think the thumb indeed needed to be foreshortened a bit more and also been given more of a graphic shape to match the other fingers. Secondly I think I'd make the first digits of the fingers wrapping around the can a little bit shorter as well, as they would be slightly more aimed at us, wrapping more around the can and lastly I think some kind of indication on the wrist/elbow joint somewhere would be good aswell. But honestly, these are all minor tweaks, I think your sketch is pretty great! :D | Artwod Feedback