Hi there, sorry about the delay! I think the pose looks sick, but maybe the proportions of the body feel a little bit off? (If the head is small and the legs really big because of a stylistic style then you can ignore this of course c:). And make sure the body feels like it has enough volume, so let those wraps really go over a 3D form, so I went over this pose with a simplified mannequin as support! Hope this helps, keep it up! c: | Artwod Feedback