Hi, i love your idea and design. What could improve you current drawing. I placing volumes behind each other / overlapping them to create depth and there by the feeling of 3d. I hope that makes sence. I look forward to the next one from you. :)
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Day 19
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Trying to make something different . I think the woman is wrong ; how can I fix it?
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Hey there! I like the character a lot! Very interesting. Here are a few observations: The head is relatively large, which makes it feel disproportionate compared to the body. In the same way, it doesn’t feel fully connected to the torso, and adjusting the size of the head helps solve that. I also adjusted the body a bit so it feels more proportional to the spider body. On another note, I think it would be better to change the pose of the crow on the right, because right now it doesn’t really feel like it wants to rest on the character’s hand. The way I adjusted it helps support that bit of storytelling a little more. Hope this helps!
I guarantee , it helps!