Hello there! I'm a fan of the sketches you've done so far! Impressive work! I only made a few adjustments to the pose. I'm not exactly an expert at drawing this kind of pose, especially with very muscular characters, but I think it reads better this way. :) The torso felt a bit strange, particularly in the way the upper torso (the chest) overlaps the abdomen. It looks odd for the abdomen to remain so flat and straight in this pose. The trapezius muscles also felt a little off. On one side, the trapezius appeared much more pronounced because of the arm position, while on the other side, it was barely visible. Ideally, the trapezius should be readable on both sides. The raised arm also looked a bit awkward, and the bicep felt too thin. I widened the bicep and generally tried to improve the construction of that arm. Sorry for the bad line drawing lol Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback