I really like the concept. The little hands in front are cool. Here are some things I notices and some suggestions. Perspective items. It looks like the top of the shoulders are not at the same angle. Maybe you want them to be flat but the one on the left looks slanted relative to the rest of the lines on the leg. The ears don't follow the same perspective line as the rest of the body. I think the one on the right need to be lower. There are also a few line on the leg and knee that could adjust slightly. Most all of these are fairly minor though. The biggest thing I noticed was line weight. When I squint at the drawing, it becomes flat because the line weight on the leg farther away is as heavy or heavier than the one in the front. I think the line weight you used on the farther back foot and near by cylinders is spot on. I think you could keep the line weight on the close leg, then slightly thinner on the middle body, then thin on the far leg. Hope this helps. | Artwod Feedback

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Hello, i want some feedback how could it be better, and what should I look after.

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I really like the concept. The little hands in front are cool. Here are some things I notices and some suggestions. Perspective items. It looks like the top of the shoulders are not at the same angle. Maybe you want them to be flat but the one on the left looks slanted relative to the rest of the lines on the leg. The ears don't follow the same perspective line as the rest of the body. I think the one on the right need to be lower. There are also a few line on the leg and knee that could adjust slightly. Most all of these are fairly minor though. The biggest thing I noticed was line weight. When I squint at the drawing, it becomes flat because the line weight on the leg farther away is as heavy or heavier than the one in the front. I think the line weight you used on the farther back foot and near by cylinders is spot on. I think you could keep the line weight on the close leg, then slightly thinner on the middle body, then thin on the far leg. Hope this helps.

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I really like the concept. The little hands in front are cool. Here are some things I notices and some suggestions. Perspective items. It looks like the top of the shoulders are not at the same angle. Maybe you want them to be flat but the one on the left looks slanted relative to the rest of the lines on the leg. The ears don't follow the same perspective line as the rest of the body. I think the one on the right need to be lower. There are also a few line on the leg and knee that could adjust slightly. Most all of these are fairly minor though. The biggest thing I noticed was line weight. When I squint at the drawing, it becomes flat because the line weight on the leg farther away is as heavy or heavier than the one in the front. I think the line weight you used on the farther back foot and near by cylinders is spot on. I think you could keep the line weight on the close leg, then slightly thinner on the middle body, then thin on the far leg. Hope this helps.

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