Super cool drawing. To push the illusion of form try to think of the arm as two separate cylinders. Leo’s right arm feels a little flat. From this angle his upper arm should be coming more towards the viewer while his lower arm moves away. It’s just missing a little foreshortening. With his belt I would really push the roundness. Make it more curved. When it’s flat and straight it tends to flatten the body.

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Péter LastName · 2026-09-16T09:17:12.354Z

Lines values and forms a bit off I think.

@jeremyrHace {count} días

Super cool drawing. To push the illusion of form try to think of the arm as two separate cylinders. Leo’s right arm feels a little flat. From this angle his upper arm should be coming more towards the viewer while his lower arm moves away. It’s just missing a little foreshortening. With his belt I would really push the roundness. Make it more curved. When it’s flat and straight it tends to flatten the body.

@pter68144838Hace {count} días

Thanks - useful tips, I will use these next time :)

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