Hi, i suggest changing the hand holding the gun turn slightly a bit. (suggest you find a suitable reference )The body can make it buff a little, because he look skinny. And I change the leg pose a bit to let him seems more balance. Plus, the coat look a bit stiff, so try add some more floating. Hope it helps :D
thanks for the paint over! yea, i shoot the reference myself, and I am skinny! :p as for pose I still prefer the dynamism of slightly walking pose due to his fluid-active characteristic
I see haha. Not a problem. Good luck with that⊂((・▽・))⊃

