Hey there! Such a cool painting, bud! :D The question is... Which one is the focal point? The house or the moon? For me, both are competing for attention since the key light is around the house, but the colour contrast is in the moon, so, I don't know which one looks first. What I'd do is to keep the moon, but I'd cover part of it with some clouds, so we can rest attention on that area and keep the attention on the house. On the other hand, you can increase the lighting on the house to get a better lighting contrast in that area, since the values of the house are sort of dark and it gets lost a bit with the rest of the scene. I liked the blue tones in the shadow areas; it would be cool to see more of these blue tones in the FG :) Hope this helps!
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Comenta 3
Night time walk
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Painted this scen from close to where i live and i really liked the beam of light coming from the house. I don't usually paint with color much or landscapes so any advice is welcome. I also made another one where i tried to add a moon from imagination
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