Hello ! No judgement in here, we put this at the door step in order to give the best feedback we can. ^^ First of all, very nice conversion of a box into a book, it's already a success if it's your first time drawing a book. You gave it a clear direction by adding the ribbon above so we can see it's already special. (maybe a leaser book!) I redraw a bit around to emphasize the volume of your book. And here comes the nugget. While you start and draw any object you desire to draw, breaking it into small bite size shape in order to make it more easy to draw. You could ask yourself for example: "Is it a square? a cylinder?" It will help you get into a more analytic state of mind before heading to drawing and it will help you tackle your drawing more easely. I realise a breakdown on how you could analyse the book in order to reproduce it after ward in let say for example another point of view. I also mention "T" lines. This referes to overlapping in general. When object are getting over each other, T line is where each of these form meet each other. I hope this feedback will help you understand and explore further some drawing concept. Feel free to ask more questions. Cheers !
Thanks so much for the feedback!! I really like how you gave the page cover additional space, so the book pops out a lot better in the image and looks a lot more realistic! I think I need to work a bit more on drawing shapes and focusing on the correct perspective points, so the item doesn't look warped. Also, really like how you spread out the drawing into three basic items, that connected create a whole book. Now when I look at it I could almost imagine what it would feel like holding the book in my hands! Now I clearly know where to improve, I hope I will insert the improved book a bit later this week, really excited to play around with the suggestions!
Pleasure to be helping ^^