Im no professional artist so take this with a grain of salt! I fixed the hair a bit since it was slightly uneven and the form was quite awkward. I muted down the light strands so they wouldn't stand out as much. For the rendering I added a dark rim around the crown of the hair. Then lightly brushed some darker grays beneath. I added shadows to distinguish the different sections of the hair. Also added shadows around the edges to show more depth and distinguish between the back hair and front hair. I also added a dark black outline I added a bit of blush because chibis usually have that more cutey look. And since chibis have minimal face rendering it adds a nice touch and makes it match the hair more. Changed the pupils a little bit since they looked a little wonky. | Artwod Feedback