maybe push the front arm angle a little and echo that tilt in one lock of hair first, then add the sideways rain if it still needs more motion, so the pose gets sharper without losing the calm mood
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I did finish this piece recently, and I do like it, but I always say to myself there's room for improvement. So I would like to hear some feedback to see how I can push this further.
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Hi there!! Fantastic piece btw! I really like the composition and the energy it brings. Now take my feedback with a grain of salt, im not that good at perspective or fore shortening. I'd say you are very close with the arms, I tried reconstructing them with the torso into perspective and hold the pose myself, I feel the arms would be a little more angled like I drawn out. I maybe incorrect though. Couple creative choices I would have done, but this is just my taste, I would have done some sideways rain and the hair maybe blowing a different direction a bit, just to had that extra punch if you know what I mean, just to make it little more dynamic, and you could even do that with the clothes. But it depends what kind of feeling you are going for. I hope something helped. You are rocking it.
idk if more motion is needed first, maybe try one clearer tilt through the front arm and shoulder so the pose reads before changing the rain or hair
Thanks a lot, I will work better on the next piece
the angled arms and sideways rain help a lot, maybe keep the hair as one clear wind shape first so the motion reads without crowding the crown