Hallo, i've took note of your suggestion and added a guide which helped me to make it look better. I also moved the nose, hair, mouth and changed the hair. Is there anything else i could improve it? especially for the lines

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MaNatchu Arts and Graphic Design · 2026-09-18T07:13:44.542Z

I can't get the proportions right on the face, i dunno it seems off for me because of the angle. I tried adjusting the forehead distance but i think its the eyes, i just can't point out what. Please help

@elowaineHace 1 mes

Hallo, i've took note of your suggestion and added a guide which helped me to make it look better. I also moved the nose, hair, mouth and changed the hair. Is there anything else i could improve it? especially for the lines

@owen88243Hace 1 mes

maybe keep the outer face line a little lighter than the hair line next, so the face reads clean without every edge having the same weight

@elowaineHace 1 mes

Ohh, okay. Thank you! I will do this thanks a lot!

@lena69184Hace 1 mes

idk maybe keep the face contour lighter than the hair, then use a few darker breaks near the eyes and under the chin so the lines feel less even without losing the angle.

@priya97570Hace 1 mes

maybe set the eye line across the head first, then check the nose and chin against that tilt before changing the forehead distance

@elowaineHace 1 mes

thank you! i will try this

@tomas54508Hace 1 mes

idk if more line detail is the thing yet, maybe keep the face contour clean and vary the line weight on the shadow side so the angle reads first

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