Hallo, i've took note of your suggestion and added a guide which helped me to make it look better. I also moved the nose, hair, mouth and changed the hair. Is there anything else i could improve it? especially for the lines
maybe keep the outer face line a little lighter than the hair line next, so the face reads clean without every edge having the same weight
Ohh, okay. Thank you! I will do this thanks a lot!
idk maybe keep the face contour lighter than the hair, then use a few darker breaks near the eyes and under the chin so the lines feel less even without losing the angle.

