Just a random sketchbook page i did one night, with a big portrait, a woman on a scooter, another man, a high school girl, some boxes, and MEGUMI??!! whooaaa... anyway, i keep coming back to this page with doubt, wondering if it's "advanced" or "official" or not (like i usually do with my art, it's rough out here for my confidence :/) So, let's sort of fix this, i guess. I've already spotted issues with the big neck, since there's not enough volume for the left mastoid muscle. Not only that, but the shoulder on the angry guy looks weird. Maybe the trapezius needs more volume, too? Idk. Anyway, is there anything else wrong...? Maybe the perspective with the scooter? The boxes? Didn't really finish the high schooler, messed up on that, too. If you guys have any suggestions, feel free to let me know!
maybe keep the main portrait as a simple head, neck, and shoulder block for one pass, then compare the jaw tilt and shoulder width to a photo before adding muscle detail so the neck and trapezius are easier to judge.
Ok, thanks! But man, you have no idea how big it is to know someone actually cares enough to try and see what's wrong with my new art after so long.. Makes me believe I'm worth artists' time, after all :)
