Hey there! I really like your drawing, it’s very colorful, beautifully rendered and the mood is lovely I think there is a construction error in the pelvis, try using the disk method (you can find it in the figure road). It really helped me understand where to place the hip joints I also adjusted the skirt and hair a bit to make them follow through her motion (I’m not sure if she’s falling but I though about that) Otherwise I just love it especially your colorful outlines and beautiful hands
Thank you very much
hip disk is a good call. idk if you need to rebuild the pelvis though, the kick already reads. maybe just let the skirt and hair lag a beat so the motion is there without shifting her hips
Thanks for your comment, I ´ll see what I can do to make it look better