Traditional art is more than welcome here, and what a gorgeous piece this is!! How I see it is that you do know how to paint water, (you did very well there in zone A) but then didn't continue the same method down at B where we see the reflection in the water. Try to look for the ripples the swans are making, and the little cutouts they create in the silhouette of their reflections. So I did a quick paintover of that, I hope it helps and keep up the good work! c: | Artwod Feedback