Hi, that is a really nice drawing, you did a good job! Please don't be so harsh on yourself. Anatomy is okay. Let's focus on flatness. First I introduced some strong cast shadows, using a levels mask, rather than painting it, I have also bumped light values here and there. Don't be afraid to make it visible. Also for such front facing composition, I would recoment moving light sorce to the side, to achieve more definition in forms. You have already started it, and by making the slight hue shift in a color of object plane where light hits, you will bring more space to your drawings, like I did in right pillow, or her hair jewelery. On a side note, eye white is not a whithest white on your image, its value should be closer to middle gray, and more baige , same for theeth. Hope that gives you some ideas, keep up the good work, and let me know if you have any more questions :) | Artwod Feedback