Bad Head

Something is off but not sure what please help🙏🏾

Children of Fire

I feel like the shading, specially on the mother's face, looks strange. I realize I struggle with the facial planes and it might be related to this. Light is meant to come from top-down, but I'm not sure I achieved it all that well. Neck area also looks off. I think overall I have a hard time shading, perhaps due to bad old habits.

Mullet!

I cannot seen to draw eyes in such a little face, maybe i should pass to digital perhaps? And also I dont think I get right how clothes flow. And I would love to get an opinion on if this "style" looks better with remarked lips, or without remarked lips

The discouraged knight

Step 4 - fixing form again

Gentle protector character concept

Hello, I’m looking for any feedback you might be kind enough to share with me. I’m working in a cell-shading style so no soft transitions (except for a few air brush strokes), kinda like hades. Especially the face, I’m not sure I got right. Thank you!

Facial expressions pt 2

With fineliners and watercolor. I had more patience than the previous one.

Focus point

This one is kind of done, but I am not 100% happy with it. Struggling with keeping focus on his face and hands. Anatomy is also bit wonky. Any feedback is welcome.

Day 15

another day down

Oh god its too hard

I tried to draw with a pen only so i wanted to indicate the form of his clothes with the least amount of folds an details But I think i messed up (not too much but still 😁) And for shadows, i picked a direction of light which doesn't create big and too much shadows (ignore the vector). can anyone give me a feedback?🙂 Sorry for terrible English