Hi there, sorry for the delay! I actually think you were on track for making a really nice watercolour here! I think the next step for you would be to add more lighting to the scene. However, with watercolours, you can only really go darker, not lighter. What I do like to do when i work traditionally is wait until it dries and then go in with coloured pencils (and white pen) to further define things like this c: Hope it helps and keep up the good work, always love seeing so much traditional work on the platform! c: | Artwod Feedback