Hiya! I think the main issue im seeing is lack of decision making. Theres a lot of mess. Some places have strong decisions, some places dont, it feels very rushed. What Id say is practice just MAKING a solid decision. I want this shape here, I want the colors to be green/red, I want this, I want that. Dont just go in without a plan. Make your shapes noticeable and strong. Especially for this style. Also gave her some bottom teeth to make her lookin like shes laughing more. | Artwod Feedback