@fosco

Paintover

Hey! I adjusted the character’s proportions a bit. I reduced the width of the neck because it was so wide that it made the face feel pushed backward. I also lengthened the nose slightly so it wouldn’t look flattened, and extended the ear a bit as well. Personally, I felt the illustration looked a bit too empty without much hair, so what I did was add the silhouette line of the hair on the upper part and also add more hair behind the head, since long hair usually covers that area. Hope this helps!