Hey! I’m not really a comics expert; it’s not my main style. But from what I can see, it would really help to step back a bit and focus on fundamentals, especially perspective and anatomy. There’s nothing wrong with revisiting these. In fact, it’s something we should always be doing. Even after years of drawing, there are still gaps, and going back to basics is part of the process, so don’t feel discouraged by that. I bring this up because comics rely heavily on having a strong foundation in both anatomy and perspective. Before thinking about rendering or shading, the drawing itself needs to feel solid. Right now, the characters feel a bit off. Their proportions and perspective aren’t fully aligned with the scene, which makes them look a bit disconnected. Focus first on building a solid base. Once that’s in place, choose a clear light direction and block in your shadows accordingly—avoid shading randomly. Always think about where the light is coming from and how that affects the forms. If you have the opportunity, I'd recommend you to take the roadmaps for Drawing and Figure Drawing in Artwod. I'm sure they will help you a lot to achieve the drawing foundation you need. Hope this helps!
