The eye placement is definitely working well in this piece! For the face, your next step may be to work on the nose. Since you picked a pose where we are looking down at her, you see little to none of the under part of the nose, in black on the left are two nose types and how they might appear in this pose. even if you want a simplified style for the nose, it should still generally follow this note. I think your next step would also be to work on figures. This pose is pretty complicated since not only do we have the foreshortening coming from us looking above, but we also have foreshortening because her torso and pelvis go back in space. breaking her down into simple shapes like boxes and cylinders like this may help with perspective! Your work looks amazing, and im loving the hand!!! | Artwod Feedback