Hello there! Nice work here! Keep the character's perspective and the volume of the forms in mind. The eyes weren't following the same perspective as the nose (particularly the lower plane of the nose), and the nose itself felt a bit flat. In reality, we shouldn't be able to see the underside of the nose and the nostrils the way you've drawn them, since we're viewing the face from a slightly higher angle. The neck also felt a bit too wide, so I reduced its width. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback