You've done a really good job with the rendering, especially with the hair! I think the drawing feels a bit flat because there aren't any cast shadows. In the paintover, I've added a few cast shadows to showcase the point. In your image, there is also a slight difference in the direction of the light, most noticeable in the bottom-right piece of lit-up hair (light coming almost straight from the "camera" vs the top-left (light coming from the top left). | Artwod Feedback