Hey there! It’s a bit difficult to tell you exactly how to correct it since I don’t know what the character looks like in the reference. My apologies if I ended up changing some aspects of the original design. Regarding the hair, it’s usually easier if you think of it as ribbons. This way you can divide the hair into smaller masses and then add more detail within those sections. Think in terms of shapes! On the Artwod channel on YouTube, there are some really good videos by Antonio that explain how to draw hair, starting with the idea of thinking of hair as shapes and ribbons. As for the lips: When a person opens their mouth, you’ll notice that the lower lip usually compresses slightly. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback