Hey there! The design looks good overall! What I think would help improve the drawing is adding shadow shapes to create stronger contrast. Without shadows, there isn't much visual hierarchy, so my eye ends up wandering all over the image. By introducing shadows (for example, assuming the light source is coming from above), we create the contrast the eye naturally looks for. Notice how the hat is illuminated, followed by the mask in shadow, and then the body illuminated again. This creates a light-shadow-light rhythm that helps guide the viewer's eye toward the important areas of the design. I also painted a bit more honey around the edges of the boxes to add some extra storytelling. In addition, I gave the bees more definition so they wouldn't read as flies or simply black insects floating around the scene. Hope this helps! | Artwod Feedback