Hey! Great illustration! What stands out to me the most is the head and neck area — they don’t feel fully connected to the torso because of the way they were painted. The main issue is the connection between the neck and the shoulder/back area. Keep the trapezius muscle in mind, since it helps connect the neck to the upper back. Part of the problem is that the hair ribbon placed there hides the connection too much, and the way the forms overlap makes the anatomy feel unclear. You could slightly rotate the head into more of a 3/4 angle, which would help make that connection feel more natural. The forearm also felt slightly too long. Lastly, you could make the character a bit darker overall so the slightly brighter background helps the silhouette stand out more. Hope this helps!
