Yo! I only made a few small adjustments since the scene is already looking great overall! I really love the rocker/metalhead style, by the way :D I made the background characters slightly smaller, as well as the dog. On the other hand, the character’s face was a bit too illuminated, even though there isn’t a direct light source hitting it that way. Because of that, I darkened the character (and the scene overall) so the light coming from above can stand out more against the character’s silhouette. I also added a subtle glow behind the head to help the silhouette pop more. I slightly reduced the brightness of the cigarette as well, since it wouldn’t emit as much light as it originally did. Hope this helps!











