Hello there! Nice work on your mermaid! The anatomy felt a little off in a few areas. In particular, the way the ribcage is bending, the fact that the arm appears to be positioned behind the body while the hand is still able to rest on the tail, and the way the head feels slightly disconnected from the torso. I lowered the head a bit to prevent the neck from feeling overly long. We should also be able to see a little more of the mermaid’s left arm. Doing so would make it much more believable that the hand is actually resting on the tail. As for drawing hair, try thinking about the overall shape first and then drawing individual "ribbons" or larger strands within that shape. Approaching hair this way will help you achieve better volume, flow, and structure. It also makes the hair feel much more dimensional. There are a few videos on the Artwod YouTube channel where Antonio talks about this approach, as well as some Shorts that specifically cover hair construction and simplification. Hope this helps!
