Hey! This looks incredible! I really like the creepy take on The Little Mermaid The main thing I noticed was the structure of the character, especially around the lower section of the torso. It felt like there was a bit too much twisting in the pose, which made the transition into the tail feel less natural. I think the pose reads more clearly if the upper body bends slightly backward instead. That adjustment helps the flow between the torso and tail feel much more cohesive. I also adjusted the area where the character is leaning on the tail, since the perspective there wasn’t fully matching the angle of the arms. Keeping both elements aligned within the same perspective helps the pose feel more solid and unified. The arms also felt a little too long, so I shortened them slightly. Hope this helps! PS: Send me a PM on Discord, I cannot share the picture here. So I can share with you the drawover :) _fosco











